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Another Broken Hearted Love Poem(GOOD)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk08:08 PM 3/7/05This story may not have a happy ending,
but it's like a fairy tale in the beginning.
You were everything I wanted and everything I needed.
You were the thing that made me feel alive, the thing that made me completed.
You took my hand and led the way,
sweeping me off my feet with everything you'd say.
Nothing else matered as long as it was you and I.
I loved seeing you everyday but hated our goodbyes.
But just like every realationship our ending had come.
You'd disconnected me from everything and everyone.
Our realationship went by so fast,
I didn't know how long it was going to last.
I look back on all our memories and how we were together for so long.
Then I wonder to myslef what could of went wrong?
But look at him and his missunderstandings.
He passes wrong signals and lives with his little never endings.
He runs from his problems and can't face the truth.
He never realises what he puts someone through.
I even put my trust in him and whats not real.
He's the kind of person that don't care how you feel.
It's all about him and everything he does.
He's in it to mess around not in it for love.
He'd take your heart and break it in a million peices.
You can't think of why you loved him, but at the time there were so many reasons.
He was the only person I knew that was addicting.
I couldn't see through him, his lies were too convinving.
How could he do this to me?
The thoughts of him won't go.
They come back constantly,
and this he'll never know.
Know how much I loved him,
and how much he hurt me.
How I wanted no one but him.
And how I would of done anything.
I told him my worries and my insecures.
I told him that if I get him back, then I conquered my only fear.
You made fun of the poems I wrote.
Even for you that's an absolute low.
I'd like to see you make fun of this.
Cause it saying how you can be so bogus.
I thought we really had something special.
You hurt me, but said it wasen't intential.
When I asked you in the end,
you said you were only my friend.
Them words had killed me,
When I thought I was already dead.
My life had no meaning,
and there was nothing left to be said. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
By me and my best friend Sarah Please comment!
It's a true story...actually 2 trues stories
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| » Comments / Feedback | by amndfyblckore15 (3-7-2005 - 08:56 PM)
| yeah... i had this boyfriend... about two years ago... he was my first kiss... he was my first make out... my first everything... my best friend... he was my everything... still i love him so much and i will not date ne one else... i cry every night over what i lost... it sucks i did some stupid things for him... we have been best friends forever... until like 3 weeks ago and i had to mess things up... get into to many drugs... he stopped talking to me... but it not like i'm suicidal ... cuz the only way i'd ever kill my self is if he died... he is my life.. its been to years and i'm still not over him... how sad and lame is that??? i know i'm a dumb fucking emo kid.... i need to get a life.. oh well i'm starting to get used to this one... |
by demented_vampire (3-7-2005 - 09:49 PM)
| VERY deep. awesome. i know how it feels and it reminds me of myself and my friend. the difference is with my friend, the kid HATES her and she won't go out with the kid who is madly in love with her. She says she wants to get over him but she wont let me help her. I told her that he could go jump off a cliff (the one who hates her) and she said she would jump off after him, and I said go ahead im tired of hearing about him. I know it harsh but she shouldnt ask me for help if she wont take it. |
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