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"Phone Call" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX12:29 AM 3/8/05A little gurl,
sits all alone in this world.
She sits by the phone,
day to day,
month to month.
Waiting for her dad to call.
Havent heard from him since Christmas.
When the phone finally rings,
its her friends wanting to cheer her up.
The one day shes in a good mood,
the phone rings,
her dads on the other line.
Shes happy until,
she hears what he has to say.
Why dont you ever call me?
Are you still my daughter?
When will you come over?
To stund to talk,
she hangs up the phone.
Crying for hours,
cutting for pain,
wanting to die,
wanting to have said something to her father,
she crawls slowly,
and stiffly into bed,
knowing tomorrow is a new day. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by XjuvenileX_XdelinquentX (3-8-2005 - 12:45 AM)
Wow, It was really good. It was kindof confusing. |
by ForEverLonley (3-8-2005 - 02:00 AM)
whos, that was reallygood |
by XxBrOkeNSmiLe7xX (3-8-2005 - 11:42 PM)
wow ur good hey its kasandra write more please ur really good !! ttl |
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