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» Poem: breathing in the poisen
breathing in the poisen
written by trulybroken57
02:38 AM 3/8/05
not feeling,
just standing here unnoticed,
not living,
just breathing in this poisen,
i can't believe they did this,
how could they take away....
the numbness, the feeling
that once ended everyday?
i promised........
i will keep my promises,
for you i will keep living,
keep breathing,
keep standing........
i need a way to feel,
no drugs can end my pain,
what is left for me to do?
you can save me,
you can also break me..........
if only everyday........
i could feel your arms around me,
could hold you and never let go,
if only...........
not feeling anymore,
emptiness is left inside,
numbing all sanity,
so lonely..........
all shut inside this prison,
does anyone understand?
i'm addicted............
addicted to my blood,
now addicted to my drug,
how could they do this to me?
take away all that i have to get me through,
i miss you......
swallowing the poisen,
i've done all that i could do...........


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
mmmm, sweet emptiness............
pleeeeeeeeeeezzee comment,
i really would love to get some commentz........

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» Comments / Feedback
by Emo.style. (3-8-2005 - 11:25 PM)
Taylor, your unbelieveable. I love you so much, your my bitch! on a dick, i mean...stick ;)

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