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Fragile heart
written by GeishaGirl07:49 AM 3/8/05I feel that I’ll amount to nothing
Well their just words
I’ve heard from the mouth of a dragon
Sadly sometimes I think the same
And that I know it’s not good to my fragile heart
But my dreams they still remain the same
They still remain as strong
Come on I’m going to take you on
I’m smarter than you I’m bigger than you
I’m going to disown you
Though you already disown me
What have I done for you to call me these things?
Some times you hate me sometimes I love you
Though without you I will sure to die
So my darling mother I love you |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this ones a bit deep for me. The other day I had a little disagreement with her. As we all fight with our folks.
comments questions criticism welcomed
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| » Comments / Feedback | by EnforcedBliss (3-8-2005 - 08:02 AM)
| I really like this, you're a great poet, This one, for me at least is easier on the eyes and helps me pay more attention :P good work, keep it up :) |
by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 08:08 AM)
| I wrong it in this form just for you. :P |
by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 08:09 AM)
by EnforcedBliss (3-8-2005 - 08:17 AM)
| Wow, thanks :D that makes me feel special. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 10:04 AM)
| I like the essence of the poem. |
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