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Precious trickle
written by Genocide Reaper08:42 AM 3/8/05Above me sets the trickling.
Succulent and savoring.
Unforgettable, the taste the feel I am craving.
Open and flowing freely.
Such sweetness in bitter serenity.
Piercing it with a relentless muscle.
Pushing deeper into it that which is beautiful.
A precious burden on my face.
Slick and smooth, leaking fluids all over the place.
I shall touch it all over.
I know at the moment nothing is better.
Precious it is, and when its gone, it I shall miss.
Though I know, it will return again.
Maybe the next time, I'll get my appendage even further in. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This isn't a direct poem but it is, you'll have to read between the lines on it.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 08:57 AM)
| Sounds like a Aussie farmer to his rain. lol. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 09:08 AM)
| I'll clear it up for everyone, the muscle is a tongue, and that which is slick and smooth is well pussy. |
by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 09:15 AM)
| I gathered as much (I've come familiar with your poetry) . My brain likes to twist things in different ways. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 09:24 AM)
| *raises an eyebrow* "Familar with my poetry?" Hmm, *ponders how many times he's covered this subject* |
by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 09:28 AM)
| Hmm... a bit skeptical ay? |
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 09:45 AM)
| You could say that, but I was just wondering how far into my poetry you've been. Because I think its been awhile since I wrote something of this nature. |
by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 09:53 AM)
| Shit I haven't read all of your stuff. But most of the stuff I've seem to wonder into is about kinky sex.
So I guess I got be more adventurous? |
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 10:03 AM)
| Iv got a lot about sex and kinky sex yeah.. But Iv got a bunch of Demon and Vampire short story type poems, war poems, death, religion, life, hate, love, regret.. I try to write about a lot of different things.. I don't want to be cliched as a closed mind... Though, to somethings, my mind is closed. |
by GeishaGirl (3-8-2005 - 10:08 AM)
| Yep I've read a war one, a few religion ones. Hmm maybe I haven't just been reading about kinky sex ones.
I'm so not cliched. *goes and starts writing about cutting* |
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