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» Poem: Hopeless atempts *please comment*
Hopeless atempts *please comment*
written by mishy0077
10:57 AM 3/8/05
Tearing down these faded lies
Failing at these hopeless tries
Screaming at these grey walls
I was counting all of these falls
I lost count at about twenty two
how many more? I have no clue

Grasping myself by my scarred arm
Doing myself more bodily harm
Shouting for help, no one hears
I cry, but no one sees these tears
I hide, no one comes looking for me
All this pain; no one can ever see

I will not show these things I hide
I will always take my shelter inside
Nothing can coax me out of my shell
Because forever there, I will dwell
Using a knife to let out all of this pain
Slash, slash. I can see the blood again


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Hmmm.... I LIKE it. lol. I am in such a depressing mood, im going to go to bed now and cry myself to sleep. PLEASE COMMENT?

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» Comments / Feedback
by Genocide Reaper (3-8-2005 - 11:23 AM)
Its cool... Good flow.

by mychemromance (3-8-2005 - 06:21 PM)
Wow.

by (guest) (3-18-2005 - 09:09 PM)
you n me got alot in common my friends dont see my scars and when they do they just try to pretend that they didnt so i go on slittin my wrist

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