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» Poem: Forever
Forever
written by GeishaGirl
09:33 AM 3/9/05
Forever tainted by the sound of your voice
Forever sightless by your complexion
Forever immobilized just by you
I can’t seem to depart from you
I can’t seem to rip you from my heart
I can’t seem to rid you from my dreams
You are nothing but an asshole I like the bluntness
You are a sickening person a poor excuse for living
You are locked away they threw away the key good

I still hear the tongue
I still have the scares
I still see your disguise

Forever loathing your still putrid existence
Forever remaining the same because of you
Forever emotional for your sinful disgrace
I can’t seem to come to terms of you
I can’t seem to understand the situation
I can’t seem to move forth with this
You are a cold minded man because of this
You are a psychopath that needs to be put to rest
You are a bastard that should have been aborted


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» Comments / Feedback
by dead_chick (3-9-2005 - 10:06 AM)
there is no criticism here.. i love it

by GeishaGirl (3-9-2005 - 10:33 AM)
Thankyou.

by Genocide Reaper (3-9-2005 - 11:12 AM)
I believe it to be a great work of art. It's brutal.

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