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» Poem: My feeling for you. Precious.
My feeling for you. Precious.
written by Genocide Reaper
04:58 AM 3/10/05
You don't trust what I say... I can't change that.
All I can do is hope you'll see it one day.
even through this shroud of pitch black inside.
Its a light shining through the endless night.
I'll carry this feeling forever in the dark.
Upon the journey of genocide I shall embark.
but worry not for our love I will never forget.
And unto some one else I will never commit.
Even if at times it is hard for me to admit.
What I have for you is true.
I'm not always open.
Though dear, I am constantly hoping.
You'll believe me, it is real, the love I'm feeling.
Never forgotten.
Always on my mind.
Every night, every day, all the time.
Inside of my thoughts you reside.
With me in paradise you lye.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Alright.. Here's the truth. Best way I can explain it.

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» Comments / Feedback
by cuttie (3-10-2005 - 05:04 AM)
thats how i feel about my bf i realy like your poem keep up the good work

by Misery (3-10-2005 - 05:08 AM)
I'm going to bite my tongue love. But it's lovely just like the rest. *Glares at you thinking Damn him, even this is better than mine* Keep up the good writing, no matter the inspiration.

by GeishaGirl (3-10-2005 - 06:04 AM)
Sweet.

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