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I wish for you
written by SuperBob04:04 AM 7/23/04You are the apple of my eye
My heart's true desire
How would I get by
Without you to admire?
If you were to leave me in this "home"
I would cry forever
Never let me be left alone
Or my tears would form a river
I need you now
My heart you hold
With you I'll end up somehow
And to your body I will mould
One thing I won't deny
Something that rings true
In your arms I wish to lie
And proclaim my love for you |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wrote this a while back...well a few days ago...actually...didnt get around to posting it here...until..now...anyroad..its for Corey...doubtful he's ever gonna see it...but here it is...just incase i need a reminder to not try and destroy what i have with him
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (7-23-2004 - 12:55 PM)
| stanzas 1, 3 and 4 are perfect... and the 3rd stanza is excellent... i wish i could relate... but i can still feel it... very good poem... |
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