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» Poem: So Close To An End
So Close To An End
written by SuperBob
04:13 AM 7/23/04
I am no longer amused or made happy by you
I want you all out of my life
I can't take this anymore
What the fuck is wrong with me?
Sure, we were friends for so long
But now my time has come
You no longer mean the world to me
I just don't know how I let this be
I want to go back to the old times
But I'm sorry
That just won't work
I can't do that
I won't do that
For now I am gone
Forget about me
Not saying that I will forget you
Just saying I'm not worht your thoughts and memories
So goodbye...Dear friends goodbye
Now, this IS my time to go
But we will meet again,
One day I know we will
In the future our paths will cross...
But we can't achieve that
Until I pass


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i am confused...i dont know what is wrong with me...my friends are just getting to be a huge annoyance..i dont want to be with them anymore..i knew this would happen..that was why i wanted to get out of here..but hey...like everythign i try it all falls down around me...

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (7-23-2004 - 12:58 PM)
i can relate to the poem a little bit... i can relate to the footnote 100% i know that freinds can just bring you down... but they are the ebst thing you'll ever have besides yourself... keep writing the excellent poetry... you're a really good writer

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