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Dad please dont leave
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk06:01 AM 3/11/05Watching you lie there in your hospital bed,
hoping next time I see you, you won't be dead.
It's hard for you to breath, and your trying so hard.
The blood is blocked and can't reach your heart.
You have one Kidney left, and it's almost gone.
They have to inject this dye in you so your heart wont be done.
But it can kill your kidney completely.
They can put you on a machine, but their's no guarentee.
They had to get you to milwaukee, cause our medical card didn't exept madison.
If I had the moeny I'd fly you anywhere in Wisconsin.
Dad please don't give up I know you can make it.
Things have gotten hard but I've learned to take it.
You have to be strong Daddy you'll make it through.
I can't imagine living without you.
Please dont leave me now Dad, im only fourteen.
God dont take him away, if you exist proove it to me! |
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This entire thing is true! It all hapeed today!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-11-2005 - 06:06 AM)
| Oh God I'm sorry... I have lost many family members in my life through a slow painful death but never one of my parents. I hope he gets better. |
by emilly (3-11-2005 - 06:07 AM)
| i'm really srry about ur father. mi father lives far away, but i still can't possibly imagine the pain it is to lose ur FATHER wen he is so close to u. stay strong, God will do wat he needs to. Hey, did u know that every1 has a star in the sky of their very own? Angels included. Jst thought that knowing u have ur very own protective star mite cheer u up a little. ;) |
by ForEverLonley (3-11-2005 - 06:11 AM)
| ...who..that poem is AMAZING, and i'm sorry about ur dad, and i really hope things get better!...keep up the good work!
*Renae |
by hot_cali (3-11-2005 - 06:15 AM)
| I think that your poem is so sad ,i know how it feels to watch a loved one die, knowing you cant do anything about it. |
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