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Mental beatings
written by GeishaGirl
08:25 AM 3/11/05
With every sound of my foot step
I hear yours behind me heavy in return
I hear my breathing my heart pounding
Only to hear yours in a damned return
I keep fleeing and screaming madly
But only to hear you’re shrieking in return
I shout and scream and beg for you
Only this time I only hear the owls
I look intensely for the last time

I hope you’re proud of yourself of what you’ve ended
You’ve visually raped my eyes I wish to see no more
The screams echo back at me in memory
I don’t care for my seem to be harsh words
I wish to ravage you physically and mentally
I’m not oblivious to these words I’m conscious
A deep hatred will remain within everlastingly
You are just one of my many mental beatings


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by Genocide Reaper (3-11-2005 - 08:42 AM)
Hmm, its very unique, and quite good.

by GeishaGirl (3-11-2005 - 08:55 AM)
Eh could have better wording.

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