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» Poem: Could You Just...
Could You Just...
written by SuperBob
07:21 PM 7/23/04
I told you everything and what did you do?
You claimed to understand and said you knew.
I didn't want to hurt you and how did you reply?
You said that I didn't and you would help me get by.
I opened up, shared it all, and what did you say?
That you were proud and that distance is okay.

Could you just for once be a jerk to me?
Could you just tell me to go to hell?
I don't know why you bother with me.
I have basically said "I hate you"
Yet you stand around and wait for me.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dont know....i just want them to hate me....i cant take the false hope they give that everything will work out...i dont want it to work out...at least i think i dont...i want them gone...bt damnit htey hold on with a passion

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» Comments / Feedback
by Emma! (7-24-2004 - 06:48 PM)
Oh my god! That is amazing! *applauds*

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