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Dark Cloud(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me11:38 AM 3/12/05You want me to love you
like a cloud loves the rain...
I should set you free
in hopes of seeing you again...
But I can't help but feel
Like a desert in the sun...
Ignored by the rain
which is elsewhere having fun...
The lightning in this cloud
is sharp and very uncertain...
The cloud needs to set the rain free
Across the desert like a curtain...
In hopes the rain will make flowers bloom
and reach up to the sky...
And not rush away quickly
Leaving all dusty and dry...
So give this cloud strength
To rain like never before...
To give his sweet love wings
So she can finally soar...
Then just maybe
as she flies high back into the air...
She will join her cloud again
Who will be patiently waiting there...
The cloud will hunger for the rain's return
Like someone searching for gold and mining...
For I am a dark cloud now
But you are my silver lining… |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Deathcrush (3-12-2005 - 03:25 PM)
| great rhyme interesting prospects, as the rain to the clouds,i like it |
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