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» Poem: Here you go 'guest/critic'
Here you go 'guest/critic'
written by Genocide Reaper
09:20 PM 3/12/05
You dislike my attitude.
You dislike my poetic multitude.
Iv only got this to say.
Ride my middle finger while you suck my dick.
Because to me, you're nothing but a whiney little bitch.
Something under my skin crawling, I can't satisfy the itch.
Ridicule my poetry.
Try to demoralize me spiritually.
Well, remember this.
My middle fingers in the air.
So keep sucking my cock because I don't care.
The rest of my fist is soon to infest your cunt.
Then my arm will bury deep into that vile rut.
With my foot following shortly to your ass.
The test of poetic prowess you'll never pass.
Bow down and kiss my feet.
Lick the rest of the critics saliva from between my toes.
Face it punks.
Off you have just been told.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Hope you enjoy it... And you seem to remind me of two other idiots.. No, I don't think I'm a vampire.. Do you even know what the term blood thirsty means? Even though I do like the sight and taste of blood. I'm not a 'Goth' Never would I label myself as such.. How ever, you wish to speak of lame, when you mention Mr. Rodgers.. Oh yes, I am so very insulted by that remark.. You're just some punk kid with an opinion.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Tanasa_bg (3-12-2005 - 10:44 PM)
No, deffinatly not interesting or good. But dont listen my oppinion, cuz i'm a little critical n pssimistic right now...

by Genocide Reaper (3-13-2005 - 04:11 PM)
Say what ever you want. It'll just give me something to think about and eventually respond to with a poem.. Feed me your discontent and hatred.

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