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That skater guy
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk05:39 AM 3/13/05I remember you, that skater guy.
I remember how you were so crazy and funny!
I remember we had health together, hour 5.
I remember when you cried in front of me.
Leaning agianst your locker you head in your hands.
I didn't know you then, and I didnt understand.
I recall art class sitting by you.
I recall watching you draw, you're amazing at it too.
I recall talking to you all the time.
But I never wanted you to know I liked you, I knew my place in line.
You were something everyone liked,
I was another non existant life.
I liked talking to you online.
I liked when you told me how you felt inside.
I liked being near you and hanging out.
I liked being with you some how.
We only hung outside of school once but it made everything better.
I remember how cold it was but I wanted to see you didn't care about the weather!
I hated when we made that site.
I hated the fact that It didn't feel right.
I hated how after it was over so were we.
I hated how I no longer existed and ya ignored me.
I remember how hurt I was when you stopped being my friend.
I did something stupid to make all the pain end.
I wish everything would of turned out differently.
I wish you'd still talk to me.
I wish I woulden't of been abandoned.
I wish we could just be friends!
Even though our realationship was only close for a little bit.
I'd do anything to have back just half of it.
Maybe then I woulden't have to cry,
over my loss of that skater guy. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Tainted_Soul_777 (3-13-2005 - 05:50 AM)
| I looooooveeee this poem. Its so true and it has such a great way of explaing the story AND making it ryme and sound understandable. This poem is such a sad story and anyone who reads it would find that out, thats what makes it so great casue I kno the story and even though people dont know you, they do too. I really hope you can find someone and be happy and feel right with them. "The Sun will come out tomorro" But it just might be a long time for tommorro to come. Even so, look forward to it cause youre a tough cookie. Chest Pound Two Fingers lol. Cody been through a lot, and he bogus still for what he does to girls, but perhaps he doesnt even realize it...kinda like what Brad did. I thought he was killing me and hated me when really, I was doing it to myself. I love this poem. You did awesome, as usual. I wouldnt expect any less from such an outstanding poet. |
by (guest) (3-13-2005 - 06:40 AM)
| wow thats sucha great poem! i can relate to it totally! n its sucks losing ppl u really care about but than when u think about after a while u relize ecerything u felt n did with them wasnt as great as u thought n instead of saying it u i should b saying to myself its just hard to convince urself that but i comptly understand!!! i-m me sometime! sambina9 or Xxplaymate256xx
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by imindiehorray7 (3-13-2005 - 07:54 AM)
| freaken freaken good awesome wow whoa .... |
by LilDiVA0015 (3-13-2005 - 08:37 AM)
| dude, I was reading this and yea the title "skater guy" caught my eye.. hm and yea the guy i like IS a skater and his name IS cody.. kinda creepy.. heeh cute poem though! i really like it =) |
by XsouredXfaithX (3-13-2005 - 07:36 PM)
| wow cas i really liked that and i wouldnt expect anything else fom such a wonderful writer :) :) :) |
by dancingrooster08 (3-15-2005 - 09:39 PM)
| Aw, I'm sorry. Good poem, though.
erika. |
by (guest) (3-17-2005 - 03:02 AM)
| CASSY!!! UHHH NOT COOTER!!!! LMAO!! you better know who this is!! those poems about COOTER!! my GOSH! lol jp hes i like this poem.. its tizzite but i got to get me a name on here.. i dont know wut it is yet.. but keep up them fantabulous poems and ill enter sum of mine now...
lylas
*-*Sarah*-* |
by HurtfullyConfused (3-19-2005 - 03:33 PM)
| I love it. I like poems like this! Keep writing |
by maddog4u31757 (3-20-2005 - 02:27 AM)
| Cassie that is awesome :) i wish that i could make my poems at least half as good as that. This poem is so amazing...its....i cant even find the words to describe how good it is right now! |
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