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"My life is Fucked Up" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX06:14 AM 3/13/05| Having you as my dad, I wish Id never meet you. And now as I think back at my life, you never really cared for me. You never called, only when my brothers were there. Never coming over, only when my brothers were there. Acting as if I was never there, acting as if I wasnt a human, just a peice of dirt on the ground. And now I know that I have lived a worthless life living. And I wish I was never here, to know this pain. I hate everything, me, you, my fucked up family! And you have caused me all this fucking pain! And you sit there and lie to my face, and thats what really hurts, the lies you tell me! And now, I shall live no more, because I have no point in living a worthless life. No point in bieng in a world where I dont belong! I have longed for a loving dad, but I now know I will never have one. |
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~A loser that loves her guitar!
Rocking all night,
Riding all day!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-13-2005 - 08:00 AM)
by (guest) (3-13-2005 - 09:25 AM)
| THAT PEOM IS JUST LIKE ME AND MY DAD HE NEVER LOVED ME HE JUST DIDNT CARE FORM ATTALLAH |
by BAMZGURL (3-14-2005 - 03:41 AM)
| WELL THE POEM HAS ALOT OF MEANING FOR ME ITS SO DEEP.I LOVE IT.AND AS PARIS HILTON WOULD SAY "THATS HOT" |
by Can_I_be_YouR_heRoiN_ (3-15-2005 - 04:43 AM)
| nice poem. its really good. it relates to me and my dad... |
by (guest) (3-15-2005 - 01:14 PM)
| its a really good poem and reminds me of my own situation |
by (guest) (3-15-2005 - 10:57 PM)
by Always*Tree (3-16-2005 - 12:16 AM)
| nice words .. write on and stay strong. :-) Screw it |
by xMaskOfHappinessx (3-16-2005 - 02:58 AM)
| Maybe u should ignore ur dad, forget him? |
by (guest) (3-16-2005 - 09:30 AM)
| i hope you are still around as it would be sad to lose such a delicate flower such as you. you will never know me as it only says guest but i hope you keep my words in your mind forever. i apologize for your dad being a total piece of shit but we all had parents that werent everything they or we thought that they should be. your dad was a totally terrible dad and didnt treat you like the angel that you were and are, but you know that he is a terrible dad and he knows this too, so be better and stronger than him and move on with your life, he cant hurt you anymore. you can see him for what he is and he cant hide it from you like he does so many others, he is only fooling himself and he knows this. years down the road he will come to you a broken and beat down man and its up to you whether you accept his tear stained apology or whether you slam the door in his face. you deserve so much better than what you have gotten and when you are older you will be able to get that, just dont give up hope and let life beat you down. fight it for all that you have. there is no cowardice inside of you, so why take the cowards way out? you have made it this far in life you can make it the rest of the way and become something more than he thought you could be and be happy with who you became. ;-) god bless you and i love you |
by brittanysmith120 (3-17-2005 - 04:57 AM)
| yeah, you need more respect for the person who helped bring you to earth. If your father actually hated you, which I'm almost posotive he didn't, it was probably because you're some freak goth wanna be. if life is so bad just kill yourself! |
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