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» Poem: I died in more then 1 way
I died in more then 1 way
written by suicide_penguin
06:39 PM 3/13/05
You stand in front of me
With a gun to your head
Telling me in a moment
You will be dead

I cry as you pull the trigger
At you I'm yelling no
But you don't listen
And tell me you have to go

You explained to me your problems
And how you can't live life
But I tell you the good things and
How you can be someones wife

You say good bye one last time
And I hear shots ring out
I cry as I see your body
On the floor all spread out

I yell for 000 and
the ambulance come take you away
they tell me like I don't already know
that today is a very sad day

One thing that is a twist is
That its me and not you
I'm the one who commit suicide
But I had to do what I had to do

I tried to talk to someone
There hours were 9 to 8
But I can never make it
So now its to late

Im 6 feet under now
Its been 2 days
And on my gave-stone it reads
"she died in more then one way"


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» Comments / Feedback
by Cut_Up_Angels (3-13-2005 - 07:05 PM)
i can sssooooo relate i no u dont know me and i dont no u but dont do anything that someone who loves u might regret U2 me ok? i like you p[oems theyre really deep

by darkness_follows_me (3-14-2005 - 05:34 PM)
i love your poems,your so talented,keep up the good work:D if you eva wanna U2U i am always up 4 it

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