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» Poem: When I wake up
When I wake up
written by GeishaGirl
06:41 AM 3/14/05
Every morning I wakeup
I seem to think the same thing
Another day with no pay
Another day with no point
Seventeen such a cruel age
Wait let me rephrase that
Adolescents such a cruel age

Always looking for answers
Always trying to please someone
Always trying to please Mama and Papa
Always on the brink of breaking point

Every morning when I wakeup
The same thing drills at my mind
Fuck sake its seven thirty
Fuck sake it’s a week day
Year eleven such a cruel year
Wait let me rephrase that
School years such cruel years

Always some hounding to be done
Always some expelling to be done
Always some homework to be done
Always… shit what am I doing writing this?


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by Virus V. x1 (3-14-2005 - 06:58 AM)
When i wake up, yes i know im gunna be, im gunna be..... oh....wrong song... put thats what this peom reminded me of

by GeishaGirl (3-14-2005 - 07:01 AM)
Lol do I really want to know what its about?

by Genocide Reaper (3-14-2005 - 08:06 AM)
lol... Like every other person that wakes up? Horny? lol. I loved the poem *applauds*

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