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The Demon *please comment*
written by mishy007708:03 AM 3/15/05Trying to dry these eyes of mine
Trying to walk on the path of life
Trying not to bleed on your shirt
Hoping not to be treated like dirt
Screaming in this confined room
Left alone to deal with my own doom
I cry, but no one sees these tears
I laugh and the demon dissapears
I scream, and it attacks me again
Making me go through all this pain
I smile and you come back to me
Now the point of life, I can see |
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Im not sure what it's about, PLEASE COMMENT???
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Jimmy_Lippstikk (3-15-2005 - 08:36 AM)
| sure i'll comment. when i see ya i comment. it looks lovely. at the end. |
by raven-nova (3-15-2005 - 09:43 AM)
| it's a relate able poem. everyone i know has something in there life that thay could relate to it. |
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