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» Poem: Why I should give up writting
Why I should give up writting
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
09:21 AM 3/15/05
My favorite thing in the world to do,
and I completely suck at it.
This entire time and it's just now getting through.
the thing I though was mine, I never had it.

I feel so empty now,
but im going to continue to write.
To make a good poem I dont know how,
I can never do it right.

This just shows how pathetic I am,
for making another attempt.
I hope someone can understand,
how much writting ment.

I have 130 poems all useless shit.
Feelings mushed out for all to see,
no one wants to view it.
Hell not even me!

So if you're readin this,
I appoligize...
Because all this is just meaningless shit.
But it helps me stay alive.

It makes me think I have a reason to live,
or thats what I though before.
I thought help with my writtings I could give...
but I dont think that anymore..


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READ MY OTHERS SO U KNOW HOW BAD I AM!!!THEN COMMENT AND TELL ME!

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» Comments / Feedback
by Tainted_Soul_777 (3-16-2005 - 12:43 AM)
Cass, stop being modest. Youre the best poet I know, and I know a lot of people who write. WHY do you say all this bad stuff about you that seriously isnt even true. Youre such a good writer and you know it.....you you please tell me where you come up with all this?

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