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Suicide for space
written by suicide_penguin01:10 PM 3/15/05Untamed tears
They flow so wild
Unloved hearts of scar
Cuts wont heal
They grow more painful
Our hearts are ripped apart
Pool of love
It grows too full
We move to oceans of hate
Drowning ourselves
With all this anguish
Now suicide for space |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-15-2005 - 04:15 PM)
| it's really good :). i love all your poems. |
by deadheart4ever (3-15-2005 - 04:35 PM)
| Your a very good poet, suicidepenquin!!!! YOU ROCK |
by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 05:28 PM)
| It's alright; some good use of language. |
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