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'Tis Now A Cross Upon MY Back
written by sarah1008704:18 PM 3/15/05A liar, a fake; i fail to take into account
other thoughts or feelings to any amount.
I do as i please, and i sluttily tease.
For evrything my boyfriend does lack
'Tis now a cross upon meinen* back!
I fail to acheive verstehen^ and need
A sin upon the Christian creed
I'm an atheist, i care not, need alot
I pushed hard to acheive a cack
Tis now a cross upon my back
So i cheat, i lie, i deceive
I do not give, if i do not receive
So come and go as you please,
No longer do i like my peas**
Everything that my boyfriend does lack
TIS NOW A CROSS UPON HIS BACK! |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 04:27 PM)
| It's still pretty rough, and could use some more thought and editing. It has potential though. |
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