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Untill you have nothing(PLZ COMMENT!!!)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk07:18 PM 3/15/05I'd try to make my self presentable,
but the point I don't see.
I wish I wasen't so resentful,
sadly that's just me.
I'd pray for God to help me,
why talk to air?
I had goals I could acheive,
but why care?
I have friends who are worried to death,
I don't know why.
Sometimes I wonder when it will be my last breath,
though it seems like I already died.
My parents think im crazy,
even though I am not.
I don't see the point in defending,
when to loose I don't have a lot.
I fell in love,
for some stupid reason.
I don't know what I was thinking of,
Another opportunity for a guy to conceive in.
I have given up,
on almost everything.
You go intill you've had enough,
or untill you have nothing. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by deadheart4ever (3-15-2005 - 07:20 PM)
by cryptic_misery (3-15-2005 - 07:23 PM)
by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 07:26 PM)
| Good content; your lose your meter in spots, but it's easily fixed. Good job; I liked it. |
by blurredvisions (3-15-2005 - 08:54 PM)
| no way! i can totally relate. i loved it. it was awesome. |
by Tainted_Soul_777 (3-16-2005 - 12:41 AM)
| that was another awesome poem, like i said i dont expect you to EVER right a bad poem. i love ya cass |
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