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remember
written by not_alive_nor_dead12:25 AM 3/16/05remember the nights
you'd look into my eyes
you'd say you love you
you'd tell me nothing but true feelings
remember the nights
remember the days
yuo'd tell me i was perfect
i'd tell you you were wrong
that you only thought that
remember the days
Remember the hours
we'd spend together
just talking about our futurs
About how we'd be in 5 years
remember the hours
remember the minutes
you'd spend looking at me
you'd tell me i was beautiful
you'd kiss me every now and then
remember the minutes
remember the seconds
we'd be mad at one another
we'd be silent
then we'd make up
remember the seconds
remember the glances
the glances i'd send
the ones you'd return
the ones that said so much more
remember the glances
but remember the one moment
when i screwed it all it up
i told you it was over
just like my life the day before
remember the moment
i remember all those times
the good the bad the evil
the times i'd slit my wrists
just out of love
i remember
i was happy then
now i'm a mess
i miss you
more than this poem means
every word from my heat
i was happy
just remember the nights
you'd look into my eyes
you'd say you love you
you'd tell me nothing but true feelings
just remember the nights
do as i said and you'll realize.... I AM SORRY |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by d4rk_p03t (3-16-2005 - 01:27 AM)
| I could feel your pain. your really a very good poet keep it up I LOVE IT it was sooooo good |
by BabyGurl4391 (3-16-2005 - 02:36 AM)
| daaaaaaamn i like ur poem, it reminds me a lot bout my ex bf. i yelled and screamed and dumped him though i didnt quite mean to, and then i slashed my wrists and stuff. good job, very professional i think. |
by (guest) (3-17-2005 - 10:40 PM)
| It couldn't have been written any better. It's a good poem. |
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