| » Poem: Love pain hate rolled into one |
Love pain hate rolled into one
written by Genocide Reaper07:31 PM 3/16/05Celebrate the hate.
Fuck the atheistic views.
Its not part of me.
I'm not lacking anything.
Pride and faith fuel me.
Want some punishment for your nonsense?
You get what you deserve.
Reap what you sow.
This we all come to know.
My hands are going around your throat.
Down you'll go.
Breathless, suffocated.
Now is all been stated.
My hatred.
Pure burning rage.
In my eyes.
You'll go down in flames.
Its always been the same.
Scared so you look at God to place blame.
Using the creator as a scapegoat, that just proves.
Your a coward.
Unworthy of anything.
And you wonder why you have NOTHING!
Question existence.
Bring me the violence.
You'll be my punching bag.
And I'll then beat you to death with your own leg.
I'm not fucking around boy.
So whine and whine, come up with a new ploy.
Phase me not.
In a self placed prison you rot.
Faithless, weakness, idiocy, its all you got.
Beaten down by the master that wears the crown.
A crown made of severity and honesty.
Love hate and pain.
All rolled into one.
Now that's GOD! |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by just_nikki_21 (3-16-2005 - 07:43 PM)
by Dianesjewels (3-16-2005 - 09:29 PM)
| You seem to be trying to write with a specific rhythm (beat) to your poem; but your beat changes; thusly interrupting your flow. Read this one out loud to yourself; decide on the meter you want to use, and if you want to change the meter part way through the poem; consider breaking it up into separate stanzas, so your reader will know there is a pause and possibly a beat change. That said; regarding content, good job. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-16-2005 - 10:09 PM)
| I'm not trying to write with anything I just write what comes to mind. I don't force poetry. I just do it. |
by (guest) (3-17-2005 - 10:52 PM)
| Dude this is one of the pimpest poems i have ever read! whoa thats pretty fricken awesome! KEEP IT UP PLAYER! BYE |
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