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"Preps and Posers" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX11:29 PM 3/16/05Sitying here tinking about everyone,
not knowing what to do with this pain.
Everyone saying that I should go write a peom,
and stay away from them.
What do they think I am,
a worthless peice of shit?
I know my life is hard,
and I know I write poems to show my emotions,
but why make-fun of me?
Why call me names?
All I wanna do is try to be happy,
try to have a life,
but you are stopping me from doing this.
Today was a fucked up day,
because of the fucked up people I have to see at school,
and then at home.
I rele wish sometimes,
that I was not here,
Its like everyday,
Im isolated in my own room,
wanting to block-out the visions of you and your friends,
telling me the same shit everyday.
Thats why I hate people like you,
preps and posers!
I hope you all fucking die! |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by abercrombieXmeg (3-16-2005 - 11:41 PM)
| um.....thats kinda phsyco |
by Dianesjewels (3-17-2005 - 12:00 AM)
| A lot of spelling errors; you have a couple of good rhymes, but overall, the poem lacks depth. Choose your language carefully, so as to convey feelings & emotion in a way that ordinary spoken/written language cannot...or in other words, use poetic wording to try to draw your reader in; keep it interesting. |
by brokelittelkid (3-17-2005 - 12:59 AM)
| o come on it was not that bad |
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