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Life..... good poem
written by Tainted_Soul_77703:01 AM 3/17/05Close your eyes
And feel the never ending sensation
Caught up in every lie
And every burning temptation
Dont speak
I know what youre about to say
Ive already established that I am weak
And someone sets it in more each day.
Tryed to forget
What I did in the past
But it hasnt happend yet
Im just wishing it wont last.
I wonder why
I still get trapped
In every lie
And feelings are wraped
Theyve become so tight
Im missing you more and more
And Im crying more at night.
I try and pretend that everythings okay
It doesnt matter now
No matter what I say.
I just wish that someone would help
But like Ive always said
In the end
We only have ourself |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
FREAKIN COMMENT IM GETTING SO SICK OF PEOPLE NOT COMMENTING GOSH!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by TAINTEDSOULisBACK (3-17-2005 - 03:41 AM)
| The poem was great, but maybe the reason people aren't commenting on your stuff is the fact that you use caps alot, and that is super annoying? |
by YouSmileAs_I_Die (3-17-2005 - 03:50 AM)
| thats pretty cool...the last line is awesome. |
by SweetlyLiedLullabys (3-17-2005 - 05:02 AM)
| haha....u can always count on me to comment. i'm still a fan of ur writing.... |
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