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» Poem: Nothing Left...plz comment
Nothing Left...plz comment
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
08:30 PM 3/17/05
I dont know what im running from,
or why im so afraid.
I wonder when I'll wake up,
or come back anyway.

I hide behind my confusion,
and my misbelief.
I feel love and think it's an illusion.
And say things I dont mean.

I do some crazy things,
and hurt some innocent people.
I never ment to be mean,
Id rather cut myself agian with my needle.

People say I am inconsiterate,
and others say I should have respect.
Well if you think the things I say are literate,
as for hope there's none left.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
People give up n me to easily.
please comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-17-2005 - 08:39 PM)
wow......cool

by XsouredXfaithX (3-17-2005 - 08:44 PM)
awesome job cas..:) i liked it

by (guest) (3-17-2005 - 10:43 PM)
hmm....i dont know really what to say about this one. its well written tho i can say that but about the content i dont kno what to say.

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