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» Poem: you were in my way
you were in my way
written by not_alive_nor_dead
09:31 PM 3/17/05
today is the day
the day this'll all be over
i'll say goodbye
please don't get in my way

i'll jump of a cliff
drown myself in the pool
i'll slit my wrists with my razorblade
just please don't get in my way

you were in my dream
you were at the bottom
you caught me when i fell
you were in my way

you were at the pool
you had a raft
you jumped in
brought me to the top
you were in my way

you apeared in my picture
it was hanging in my bathroom
you took away the razors
you again were in my way

you saved my life X3
but my first attempt was worse-
and you were in my way

the blade was ready
i was alreadt numb
i about to go
but again you were in my way

i slit your wrist
you blead to death
i felt my soul go to hell
you were in my way

i payed my respects
i never knew your name
i just agreed to live my life
for you were in my way


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by not_alive_nor_dead (3-17-2005 - 09:39 PM)
this is one of my fave. poems that i wrote... i did this to my last string of hope i had left to saty alive.. i just ended writing this poem as if i did it to a person.... it's basically a poem where i killed someone who tried to save me like i find my hope did

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