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u got my heart (coment plz)
written by not_alive_nor_dead09:58 PM 3/17/05you gotta understand
if you think i should say sorry
think again
just cuz i said goodbye
doesn't give you a reason
just to kill my every point of life
i say you should come and talk
talk to me
tell me what you think of me
ile tell you my reasones
my reasons of goodbye
they are becuz of a certain someone
a cerattin word called pressure
ile love you
no matter where i am
or where u go
in life you can love another
i can too
but remember
u still have my shattered heart
keep it
break it
love it
leave it
just remember,
you control my every emotion
i feel what you make me
ime sorry if i ever hurt you
but your hurting me more
your sqeezing to hard
i think your tryting to make me stop
make me stop loving you
but i can't
you cary with you my mistakes
just let go of my grudges
and live with what you have left
you can control me
make me love another
but you can never ever control my love for you
so every drop of blood i bleed you will control..
you make me cry
you mkae me bleed
you make me love
but i'll still love you |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by not_alive_nor_dead (3-17-2005 - 10:07 PM)
| every letter in this poem is from my heart.. please comment my words.. i need to kno what poeple thinkz of it |
by (guest) (3-17-2005 - 10:35 PM)
| This poem is the best, it's sort of confusing but it's good. |
by spaceageblues (3-18-2005 - 01:02 AM)
| The poem is not one of the great masterpieces, but a reader can understand very easily that it is from the heart of the writer, and so the impact is there. However, work on form and rhythm. |
by (guest) (3-18-2005 - 02:33 PM)
| damn that iz good as hell you just explained all my feelings--- u can email me if ya wanna talk @ dbltrbl523@yahoo.com |
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