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"Alone" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX01:04 AM 3/18/05* I sit on my chair
and open my drawer
i lied to my mother
when i told her no more
i take out the scissors
and roll up my sleeve
i wipe off my smile
that i use to deceive
It's hard to find
a fresh spot of skin
but soon i see one
and the cutting begins
i don't do it for stress
It's just my dad is too ruff
i also do it because
I'm just not good enough
It's a way to punish
myself for things
that i could have done better
now that pain it brings
After awhile, I let the scissors free
I drop the scissors
and put them away
they will wait for me
for another day
i clean up the blood
my wrist starting to hurt
i feel so good now
more ready and alert
i wish someone knew
about all my pain
yet i roll down my sleeve
and wash the tears down the drain
i crawl under my covers
and continue to weep
knowing that I'll never
get any sleep |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by silent_tears09 (3-18-2005 - 01:10 AM)
| I love it! I love the expression! Your a great poet! Keep up the good work ^_^ |
by BrokenxHearted (3-18-2005 - 01:22 AM)
| wow Its really good. You're a really good poet. I just want to say that you shouldn't do that kind of stuff. I used to do it and it felt good but now I look at my body and I see so many scars that I wish would go away but can't now because they're gunna be there forever bc i cant change it. Like right now ur doin it for reasons that are none of my buisness but sooner or later I think that ur gunna regret doin it like i do now. but it's a good poem and i really like it |
by BrokenxHearted (3-18-2005 - 01:23 AM)
| wow Its really good. You're a really good poet. I just want to say that you shouldn't do that kind of stuff. I used to do it and it felt good but now I look at my body and I see so many scars that I wish would go away but can't now because they're gunna be there forever bc i cant change it. Like right now ur doin it for reasons that are none of my buisness but sooner or later I think that ur gunna regret doin it like i do now. but it's a good poem and i really like it |
by kissxmyxblood (3-18-2005 - 01:33 AM)
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