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drowning......[please read and comment]
written by trulybroken5703:03 AM 3/18/05bend me, break me,
deny me of my sanity,
with windblown torture, roses will fall,
blanketing my world with sorrow,
gently laying me down,
softly slipping away......
grasping at strands of hope,
barely seeing the light,
i'm drowning.......
drowning in the tears shed from my eyes.
tears i've cried for you,
scars i've bled for you........
in the shallow pits of darkness,
the emptiness will reign,
locking me out of my mind.
watching........
waiting........
as petals fall upon the ground,
catching thorns in tearstreaked laughter,
angels close their eyes
while pieces of memories
drip from my veins,
i'm drowning........ |
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*tears are drowning me* help........
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| » Comments / Feedback | by babi_gurl23 (3-18-2005 - 04:38 AM)
| i like it.. alot :) i can tell it was from the heart. and thats what makes poems good. check out my poems sometimes if u'd like. :) |
by Tel (3-19-2005 - 09:50 PM)
| i like it... i can relate |
by gone_22 (3-23-2005 - 11:12 PM)
| i really really like this one. |
by Emo.style. (3-30-2005 - 09:33 PM)
| i love you taylor. your amazing. lately whenever i read your poems, i see your face in the comp screen and i think of all weve gone thru and wonder why were still alive. i find myself crying a majority of the time... SEE WHST YOUVE DONE TO ME!!! lol. i love you |
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