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My drug *plz comment?*
written by mishy007710:08 AM 3/18/05I FEEL so shit
I WANT to slit
I WANT to cry
I WANT to die
I NEED to scream
I LONG to dream
I NEED you here
Then I wont FEAR
Hold me CLOSE
Your lovely DOSE
of LIFE and HOPE
Like SMOKING dope
I FEEL so high
Now I SHALL CRY
For you LEFT me
And I cant SEE |
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Not sure what its about, but yeah. PLEASE COMMENT
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xXlove+hateXx (3-18-2005 - 10:47 AM)
| thats really good, ah, drugs on the mind eh? i feel ya |
by People_scare_me (3-18-2005 - 02:23 PM)
| wow! its nice....drugs: LOL XD |
by !.:Retro:.! (3-18-2005 - 03:50 PM)
| I really like how you related drugs to the cutting addiction. Beautiful poem. |
by (guest) (3-18-2005 - 09:03 PM)
| i get that way to unlesss im high
AMP |
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