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» Poem: Dream to be loved(CoMmEnT)
Dream to be loved(CoMmEnT)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
08:07 PM 3/18/05
It's Difficult to know,
that I'm all alone.
It's hard fighting on my own.

It's agonizing to have to be strong.
It's painful to try when I slacked off all along.
It's lonely singing my solo song.

It's not easy to keep my tears hid.
It's sad saying I didn't cry when I did.
It's upseting to hurt people on accident.

It's frustrating to cry, when happy I was.
It's shameful to know, im not what you though of.
It's depressing to pursue my dream to be loved.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Plz comment I hate when I try on a poem and no one says anything!

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» Comments / Feedback
by DJGill (3-18-2005 - 08:12 PM)
Story of my fucking life.

by (guest) (3-18-2005 - 08:47 PM)
I know this feeling but pursue is exactly what i did and now i have found the love of my life and we are engaged. Just keep trying and never give up. It'll happen when you least expect it

by Whisperthewind (3-18-2005 - 08:50 PM)
Same here, that sounds like my life.

by last_only (3-18-2005 - 10:57 PM)
aaaaawwwwwww... that's so kick assidly sad. same. story of my life. but, i gave up, five stars *****

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