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All I have to loose
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk08:10 PM 3/18/05I wonder if you know im trying.
I wonder if you heard im crying.
I wonder if you saw me dying.
I'd pray for help, If I could.
I'd pray only if there was a God I would.
I'll pray for us because I know I should.
I hope you see I love you,
I hope you realize what I'll go through.
I hope you care for me too,
I hope you understand you're all I have to loose. |
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To Kalie AKA Tainted_soul_777
I love ya!!!!!
Comments....much appreciated!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cryptic_misery (3-18-2005 - 08:37 PM)
| very awesome, just one thing, it's Lose not Loose =P |
by buried_alive (3-18-2005 - 09:24 PM)
| hello..dude i loved the poem i can totaly relate! |
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