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Last Words *please comment*
written by mishy007702:33 AM 3/19/05I'm sorry, but you haven't helped me
I thought I was better, but now I see
I will always prefer the darker side
and forver I will always want to hide
I know you tried to heal me, thank you
There's nothing for you I wouldn't do
I'm trying so hard to make you proud
But I'm voicing my feelings way too loud
I prefer being withdrawn and very cold
I can not let my feelings be shown or told
I don't like people knowing what I think
To death I wish to toast a poison drink
No one can save me, I've been here too long
I am weak about this, and I can't be strong
I promised you I'll stop the cutting, so I will
I just want you to know, I can't stop what I feel
The depression, the anger, and the deep hate
You can't save me now that it's too late
But I prefer this life, I take what I give
Guess whether or not I decide to live |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this a while ago about rory, but now I realize that he has helped me heaps PLEASE COMENT
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| » Comments / Feedback | by vampiress~roxi (3-19-2005 - 03:19 AM)
| Very good. Emotions all into one dramatic and staught out story line. Nice scheme. Wicked awesome. Keep it up mate! |
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