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find my broken soul
written by trulybroken5709:34 PM 3/19/05stare at me, stare right through me
with captivating eyes,
see all that lies beyond the smiles,
catch me........
as i'm falling
deeper and deeper into the darkness......
you'll save me,
save me from my loneliness.......
hold me,
while tears are taking over,
as words mean nothing at all.........
reach into me,
feel the pain i hide inside......
tear it out,
dry my tears and smile.......
softly tell me it's alright........
heal my wounded soul,
scarred and broken,
lying in the darkness.......
warm the coldness of my life,
i'm shaking.........
the fire is slowly burning out,
my ashes,
scattered among the hopeless..........
stare through me,
watching as i slip away,
saving me........
break down my walls,
let me smile once again,
let tears become my stranger,
memories of a shattered time,
forever holding on........
never let go,
i'm letting go........
just hold me now
as i am finding hope.....
a will to stay and fight........
you are my strength,
you are my reason,
just stay and help me fight..........
i'm losing myself,
who am i now?
searching blindly in the emptiness,
find my broken soul,
alone and lost in fake illusions
help me heal.........
come save me......... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
is this good?, this is all i could think of i hope it helps..............
please comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by death_stalker (3-19-2005 - 09:38 PM)
| i really like this. I can really relate to it because i have been lost for many years and no one will find my broken soul. Keep it up. |
by Tel (3-19-2005 - 09:46 PM)
| i really like it ..... i can really relate to it too. keep it up |
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