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The Story Keeps Changing (plz comment)
written by xxxvampire_loverxxx
05:46 AM 3/20/05
The story keeps changing
Why can't it stay the same?
The story keeps changing
Who's playing the game?
The story keeps changing
Who do I believe?
The story keeps changing
Should I stay or should I leave?
The story keeps changing
Will I ever know the truth?
The story keeps changing
Will I ever see the real you?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
if you want to know the story u2u me.
Writer: Shelby L. Allen
Dedication: Tyson R. Mills
3/19/05

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» Comments / Feedback
by Starry_Nyght (3-20-2005 - 05:52 AM)
Fantastic. Really good! Am loving the way you keep coming back to the same line. Very cool. You know your stuff.

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