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Don't End It *please comment*
written by mishy007708:14 AM 3/20/05Why do you cry at night in your bed?
Laying awake wishing you were dead
Ruined hopes are being re-defined
The black sun which once brightly shined
Is now wishing everyone would die
but that's not the only reason you cry
Like the way he's always yelling at you
Telling you off for everything you do
And the way the world wants you dead
And that stabbing pain in your head
Why do you let all of this bother you?
There are people that care for you too
People that want to see you smile
ALL THE TIME, not just once in a while
There are also people who push you around
But please don't let them get you so down
Just remember I am here for you
And there are others that are too
So, put down the knife
Please spare your life |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Just sumthin i wrote as soon as i woke up this morning. I was in a poem mood. PLEASE COMMENT?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Josh_x (3-20-2005 - 08:28 AM)
| Awesome as :D I fucking love it. :)
-Josh. |
by xBroken_Soulx (3-20-2005 - 07:07 PM)
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