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» Poem: I dont feel alive...
I dont feel alive...
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
06:06 AM 3/21/05
I touch my arm,
I feel nothing at all.
I cause myself harm,
the feeling is so small.
Why don't I feel anything?
No physical and no emotion.
I think I have used up everything.
My tears, my screams, my devotion.
I scrape a little harder.
I feel a smal prick.
The wound bleeds farther.
I watch the blood drip.
I punch the wall with fury.
Hoping to see blood.
I want to feel something.
Its hard remembering what physical pain was.
I have numbed myself.
Im not scared of hell...
Because I dont even feel alive....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I dont hurt myself no more...I write this when I feel like hurting myself. This is all true I really dont feel alive. Please I need sum ones help....anyone who cares a little...Please comment.

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» Comments / Feedback
by sexy_shorty (3-21-2005 - 06:56 AM)
wow, great poem

by xXlove+hateXx (3-21-2005 - 07:59 AM)
thats a really good poem. yeah, i feel that way too, i have a huge pain tolerence level, so nothing hurts. keep up the good work!!

by babi_afta (3-21-2005 - 09:23 AM)
omfg.. I LUV ur POEM..i wiz i culd write hav the shit tha u juz did~!~

by (guest) (3-21-2005 - 08:36 PM)
hey punk (mary) i care and u kno that! r u still in counceling? u r arnet u? yeah that old guy that u told me about, hows everything with that. you should show some of ur poems to that lady counselor

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