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» Poem: Let me Live(die)*please comment*
Let me Live(die)*please comment*
written by mishy0077
11:19 AM 3/21/05
Screaming while you make me keep my life
Crying as you see the scars from the knife
"Banned from cutting" as you're mouth said
And also the words "stop wishing you're dead"

You're keeping me back from ending the pain
Can't you see I'll never be happy in this life again?
I need the blade to let out all this fear and hate
All this happy and joyfull shit can surely wait

Let me bring the knife across my arm once more
I am aching to cut more then I ever have before
And now you're telling me to stop these poems I rhyme
You watch mate, I'll definatly kill myself in little time

These poems are what I am living on in this world that is dead
So don't try to tell me that these depressing shit is screwing my head
It's the only thing left that keeps me hanging on here
Take that away and I my soul will surely dissapear
I need these words to express how I feel
I need these feeling to show I am still real

I want to feel the blade embedded in my skin
But no, you wont let me play this game I'm in
Slash Slash Slash, the bloods drips down my arm
Yes, I fucking know its doing me some harm!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
its pretty shitty, to me anyway, but PLEASE COMMENT, I may be wrong ;)

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» Comments / Feedback
by crazycat (3-21-2005 - 11:29 AM)
Wow!!!!!! that is so real!!!

by Josh_x (3-21-2005 - 11:31 AM)
:o Its not shitty, Its awesome :D Im jealous :(

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