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Hide away *please comment*
written by mishy007712:18 PM 3/21/05Desperate life
Pointy knife
Curved thoughts
swelling warts
re-defined hate
my new soul mate
bleeding inside
go and hide
inside your shell
where you dwell
let no love in
embed your skin
trying to live
wanting to give
only can take
this hateful cake
strangled kiss
ignored bliss
dying child
Running wild
Losing fear
just dissapear
Wishing flair
strengthened hair |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Just named it that coz it had a fair bit about hiding. dont know what its about, i just love poems like these and ill never give up writin my poems, i live for them. PLEASE COMMENT
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| » Comments / Feedback | by BurningTheory (3-21-2005 - 12:30 PM)
| I like it...you've got nice rhyming words..hah..funny about the Rory thing. I named him Rory because i didn't know anyone called Rory therefore no one to offend..good work on the poems =) |
by (guest) (3-21-2005 - 12:50 PM)
| I have no idea what this is about. That's not cool *i feel kinda stupid* I kinda got it and then the hair thing messed up my train of thought. |
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