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A curse (plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me
02:25 PM 3/21/05
The taste of the liquid upon my lips,
i love the way it drips and drips,
it feels like life in a storm,
inside it makes me feel all warm,

Tonight i feed again and again,
i will take my victim to my den,
i will feed on her as i did the others,
and none will be saved for my brothers,

Flesh and blood skin and bone,
i hear her like a distant moan,
my heart it beats like a drum,
matching hers i feel so numb,

daylight arising i must leave,
I still find it hard to breathe,
i will feed another night,
I cant fight it,
not with all my might.


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» Comments / Feedback
by crazycat (3-21-2005 - 02:26 PM)
deep and yet so haunting

by Unwanted_and_Broken (3-21-2005 - 04:48 PM)
Darkness this poem is so good i like it alot.

by jude (3-21-2005 - 05:54 PM)
not my type of poetry... but is good

by (guest) (3-21-2005 - 06:53 PM)
i liked it. It was very emotional and had really good rhyming. It shows your creative and an individual. CONGRATS!

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