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» Poem: if you know (comments plz)
if you know (comments plz)
written by not_alive_nor_dead
10:30 PM 3/21/05
if you know you won't be there
don't promis me that you will
don't tell me that you will be there tonight
just say you'll rather be with the guys not me

tell me the truth
not the crap i see right thru
i know you'll be lying
for you don't look in my eyes

if you really don't care
don't say your listening
don't try to solve my stupid problems
just say you rather be talking not solving

don't lie to me
ime your "special someone"
i kno who you are
i can see right thru you

if you really don't love me
don't gaze in my eyes
don't tell me you will die if i say gooodbye
just tell me that you're walking away
i'll understand

please tell me everything
tell me what your thinking
i'll understand
please don't lie

but if you love me
and you really care
and you know you'll be there
tell me you will

look in my eyes
and tell me the truth
and for that
i'll thank you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wrote this for my "best friend" he was the greatest but the day he walked away was the day i thru everything away.. he just left a letter at my locker telling me he was moving and i never seen him again.. that is where this poem stared being written.. i miss him and think bout him vryday......... hope you likey

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