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Waiting *please comment*
written by mishy007711:05 AM 3/22/05She's all alone, she's crying in the rain
She seems to be hiding from the pain
She has no one to talk to about this
She has no lover to recieve a soft kiss
She had one, long, long ago
where he went, she doesn't know
He told her to wait
3 years from this date
He thought she would realize
by the look he had in his eyes
that they were truly over
and they'd never get back together
Her heart just keeps on breaking
because of this love she is mistaking
Why did he leave her there
When he said he'll always care?
Why did he leave his "love" to die?
If only he was here to see her cry
She sits there staring out into this desserted place
In her memory and heart is the picture of his face
His kind eyes staring at hers saying he loves her, true
If only she knew his lies, i wonder what would she do?
She's empty without him by her side
All she seems to do is want to hide
Inside she is dead
She has a pain in her head
and one in her heart
for her man did part
She doesnt know but he's in a grave
He took more then he ever gave
He ended it all by himself, with a knife
He didnt like the way he was living his life
I was only a week after he left her there
He told her to wait, he told her to care
She'll probably never know what happend to him
The light inside her has grown so very dim |
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I dont know where it came from... PLEASE COMMENT
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Razzorfang (3-22-2005 - 11:15 AM)
| OK Im gunna b honest, It waz OK but It waz kinda long, Started 2 get borin but It waz still OK |
by skpwf (3-22-2005 - 11:26 AM)
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