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gone with the season(new version)
written by not_alive_nor_dead09:25 PM 3/22/05the days were short
the wind was cold
frost bite had ahold of my face
i was stiff
but that didn't matter
for you were by my side
you warmed my face
with each kiss
but as the days got longer
the wind was warmer
my face unthawed
aswell as we
it all made me cry
for it was me who had said goodbye
i watched you leave
and you watched me sit there
our love has gone
just like the season
ime all alone
but you found your way
spring is here
winter is gone
ime still here
but you're over there
my last words
may be of hate
but to you
they will mean so much more |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
hope you like the new version of "gone with the season". i looked it over and decided to make it flow better.... tell me if you like it better er worse.. thankz.. plz comment
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