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a crack i can't copmprehend (comment plz
written by not_alive_nor_dead09:45 PM 3/22/05you taught me life aint good
you told me it isn't as it should
you said ime not as good
you asked if sparing your life was something i could
you taught me life is a lie
you told me it was ok to cry
you wanted me not to die
you promissed not to say goodbye
you said you loved me
you asked if i would forget even if you were at sea
you rememberd my fear of one little bee
you made me promis to spell ur name with a c
with every kiss
that i couldn't miss
you'd say that i couldn't diss
that very smile you gave your sis.
you promissed me the world
in the amusmant park as we swirled
i remember the had wirled
and you for me you twirled
but it all had to end
every glance that we'd send
when i think of you my back would bend
and crack for i can't comprehend |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is my first ryming poem.. tell me if it means something or if it means nothing.. it was also fer school but like my other project it meant something but not as much... enjoy....
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