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» Poem: farewell and goodluck
farewell and goodluck
written by not_alive_nor_dead
02:02 AM 3/23/05
you see smiles and alughs
but all i see is frowns and sighs of sadness
you think ime ok with this
but i know ime dying inside

you can love as many as you want
but you gotta know that you made me complete
you can think i made this end
but i know it was all from a certain word "presure"

you may think they were words of hate
but to me they are words of sacrifice
you can say that i hated you
but i know i still love you

ok these are my last words
goodbye farewell goodluck
you can take it as i hate you
but i know i will always think of you

i'll say goodbye
with my razor
and i'll see my last glance
and for sure it'll be you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
mmmmmmmmmmm...... u should kno whoo this is bout lolz

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» Comments / Feedback
by xHunniBunnix (3-23-2005 - 08:19 AM)
AWWWWWW! I bloody envy you chuck! God you write them so well! How do you do it! Anyway wowz! Love ya chuck HB xx

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