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» Poem: Dreams *please comment*
Dreams *please comment*
written by mishy0077
08:49 AM 3/23/05
These dreams of you torture my soul
I am being drawn to this black hole
Trying to sleep without you in my head
Without you in my dreams, in my arms, dead

That one with you in my arms dying
For 4 months it kept me crying
And a couple nights ago I dream it again
Revivng all of this horrible, dreadful pain

I can't go on dreaming of you, i need you here
You left in the middle of the night, why just dissapear?
You were there for me for so long
Now this love seems so, so, wrong

I shouldn't have trusted your eyes
I shouldn't have belived your lies
Now forver I will dream of you comming back
And forver it will be happiness that I will lack


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about ma lost one... PLEASE COMMENT

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» Comments / Feedback
by Spiffay (3-23-2005 - 09:10 AM)
I have someone forever haunting my dreams too. All because he broke my heart.

by Bite2BreakSkin (3-23-2005 - 09:22 AM)
i love this poem! i can relate too. its really sad, and deep. take care sweety.

by (guest) (3-23-2005 - 03:22 PM)
nice.

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